Usuario discusión:Ceezee23
Esperamos que pases buenos momentos en Wikipedia. --Jbmurray (discusión) 23:13 6 ene 2015 (UTC)
Reminder![editar]
Hi, just a reminder that you should have made two new edits this week, probably to some short pages on topics about which you have some knowledge already. This should take you about ten minutes at most. --Jbmurray (discusión) 17:45 21 ene 2015 (UTC)
Hi. Thanks for your contributions, but this is another instance where you really need some kind of source. You should especially beware of saying that the city is beautiful and rich in culture. This may or may not be true, but just to say so goes against the Wikipedia policy that articles should have a neutral point of view. Instead, you should find a reliable source that says something similar, and then write along the lines that "It is often described as beautiful and rich in culture" with a footnote to the source saying that. Does that make sense? --Jbmurray (discusión) 00:02 23 ene 2015 (UTC)
Teresa de la Parra evaluation[editar]
Hi. I note that there's one day left for this assignment, and little in the way of apparent progress. Take a look at Discusión:Cristina Peri Rossi and Usuario discusión:Jnag406 for a sense of what you should be up to. ¡Animo! --Jbmurray (discusión) 00:04 27 ene 2015 (UTC)
Hola Czarina! Para el proyecto, que piensas si trabajamos sobre nuestros propios fuentes? Como debemos dividir los fuentes? --Leyla39 (discusión) 19:18 2 feb 2015 (UTC)
Contributions[editar]
Hi. I see you've been making fairly steady progress on Teresa de la Parra. Excellent! Keep it up! --Jbmurray (discusión) 20:39 10 mar 2015 (UTC)
Your recent contributions[editar]
Hi. I'm afraid I reverted your recent contributions to Teresa de la Parra. That kind of information may be of use in the article on the novel itself. But at least for now, it's much more important to be adding material taken from reliable sources. At present, there are no reliable sources used in the article as a whole. This has to be the priority for your group. --Jbmurray (discusión) 08:02 12 mar 2015 (UTC)
Thanks and comments[editar]
Heya, Ceezee23 (disc. · contr. · bloq.). Thanks for making progress on Teresa de la Parra. The source that you've added is definitely a good one. You'll see here that I retitled the section you wrote, and made some modifications. I also suggest, for the time being at least, that when you are directly quoting from an English source, you keep it in the English. This prevents errors of translation from entering in. Anyhow, keep it up! --Jbmurray (discusión) 05:06 19 mar 2015 (UTC)
typos in quotation[editar]
Hi, and thanks for this, but watch out! It seems that there are numerous typos, so much so that some of the sentences don't seem to make much sense. E.g. "Her text patriarchal Challenges hegemony-through STI mode of producing discoursem-through ITS enunciation." Not sure what that means. Of course, in any case very soon you will have to do more than just add long quotations verbatim, but this is a start. Thanks! --Jbmurray (discusión) 22:27 26 mar 2015 (UTC)